It's over 200% .. Lol! That was great. The fur thing is so true btw. Also loved the end part bout Youtube. Anyways great job on this! All my 5 are belong to you. (Haha, Warcraft never gets old.)
I must say that although no words or real story line it did somehow draw me in for the short time it was.. the bit with the "nudity" or however you would put it left me pondering what was going to happen but the others kind of ruined it because i had already read the reviews.. short, story line could of had a bit more detail, however in a short without word animation it is sometimes hard to go into large detail for a story line. The drawing and animation was mostly brilliant, i loved the detail of when he was walking down at the start and with the trees and sides of the path he was walking on, i could tell you had not went into great detail but thats what made it so great, simple but not overly simple, and not overly emphasising on the drawing technique but the story.. I'll give it a 7. My constructive criticism would be to keep your technique much the same, not necessarily needing colour, but maybe emphasise on the story line so viewers can try to understand the story more.
Hope this helps.
~Sixr
Thank you for the comment.
Since the first scene was added later, naturally writing has improved.
However, I also understand the thing with many improving points
Just watched all 3 of the ghetto episodes so far made. And i gotta say they were actually quite funny.
For flash 8 or w/e your using, you draw some pretty damn good drawings considering your only 14 like me. Loved the part "he wasn't that good of a teacher anyway."
Graphics were good as always, sounds were fine, sometimes quite hard to hear what they're saying but the body language makes up for it.
Hence why i give 10 for style.
No interactivity involved so 0 but that doesn't matter, it's a movie, not a game anyways.
Humour is 10 because it was actually quite funny. Like Pandora-Productions said, definetly deserves it's place in the Clock Crew's collection. Added you to my favourite author's btw.
Overall 10. Good Drawings, sounds fine, violence was in there, and nice style. Graphics were also good, no problems/errors with the submission. Overall a nice finish.
Thanks for the favorite! I'm glad you like the series, I'm in a creative slump with it right now, which is why I haven't really released the fourth one :P I probably will soon as I've got some pretty funny ideas for it. Thanks for reviewing!
That was so lame and i'm so tired i actually laughed at it. (omg please kill me) Nice one, i reckon you might win the record (if there is one) for making the quickest series ever xD. Nice one.
-Sixr
Oh btw, i'm off to check if any people have abused me in No.5 for that review i said. It'll be funny if someone has...
lol now im just doing reviews to make these have higher scores rofl. lol that guy in no 5 who said something funny.. he said he'd nail you to a piece of cow @$%^ (keep it G people!) He does realize that's impossible ? XD! Maybe we should make some system that tests people from "moron", "fool", "tool" or just plain
!@#%$ lol i used $ for S. eh. all im saying is he'd prob break the damn machine. it wouldn't be able to figure out which one he was, so in it's confusion it classified him as all. Which it was not made for. See, drunken people must ramble, i'm perfectly sober and i'm rambling, so imagine what some drunken people can do XD. Well keep the lame jokes coming, and for morons who say they're 18+ and are swearing they're heads off at same time (try half the guys who reviewed No.5) Act you're age, your embarrassing me. And i'm 14. (If i have to spell it out to you this is what i mean.. you're 18+ supposebly, your acting worse then my 9 year old cousin, and he's pretty bad.) And no, by this you cannot classify me as arrogant as if you are ready to be presuming so you guys really are in a class of your own when it comes to being/acting/living as fools. I do agree that some people do make some crap on this, but this aint really crap. Crap is cow dung (someone classified so even before) Unless it's constructive criticism, i don't want or see any need for anything else in a class of criticism. Don't act like children, unless you really want to prove you are still the mental age of one. Btw, if anyone says "yeah but what would you know your 14" right then and there you would prove my point by your own doing. If you believe i'm a child then there should be no need to fight with me, as even i am mature enough to see that fighting or abusement is merely useless. all it does is cause pain, so WHY BOTHER. sure, this guys probably like me and doesn't give a stuff what people say if they've got nothing good to say, so why bother criticizing someone when there not going to give a damn. There is no reason. And that is my reason. Unless the people who are stupid and believe fighting is useful don't read this, well, i guess we can't hope for everyone in this world to grow up and act their age. (Not stereo-typing, more so just those who don't act their age need to grow up.)
-Sixr
Hope this stops at least a bit of useless batter, too no dismay of my own i coherently sadly will not be surprised if i get abused for this in these reviews.
Btw if i screwed anything up, that's because i'm tired and its like some time in the morning. So i'm going to bed now. Goodnight.
Man, so far these have all made me laughed. 5 episodes were jokes that were funny because the jokes were so lame, and one of the jokes actually was funny. (lol this one's funny because its so lame: Q: What's red and looks like a bucket A: A Red Bucket! that was actually kind of funny because it was so lame XD!! hmm imma give you 10 because i can. rofl xD. (10 violence is for number 6, which aint that violent but meh i don't care!) Least you care bout your posts, because most people who post stuff on this don't reply to the reviews made on their own submission. it's dumb that they don't, either they just forget, don't have time, or don't really care what people really think of their work. If i put something in i'd want to see what people think of it. Keep up the good work. Keep them lame jokes coming. :D
Man that was a funny flash. Really cool to. Made me laugh a fair lot.
All my 5 are belong to you. 10/10 overall to. Gotta be one of the best movie submissions i've seen so far. I loved the pop-up thing. Although i would've loved for something else to happen, but overall it was a excellent submission. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
Astonishing work. Great pictures, great plot, great narration, great music (KoRn is one of my favourite bands so i knew the song.) Loved the ending part how you can choose who to be with. Keeps going and going, nice length game, long not short.
Reasons for scores:
*Graphics, due to amazing drawings, whether done by you or someone else, there magnificent.
*Style.. The style and layout of the pictures..
*Sound.. KoRn. One of my favourite bands.
*Violence. (choose yes and you'll see what i mean) the killing and also how "ferocious" he is in bed :P
*Interactivity.. makes you think of what to click and how it will affect what will happen to you.. and other obvious reasons, due to the fact it is Hentai..
*Humor.. due to the little cute owls.. (Vrooh-Vrooh!!) :P some other funny content as well..
*Overall, 10. I can see you have put a lot of work into this project, And what an astounding outcome it is! Great work!! Look forward to seeing your other work and i hope it meets the standards of this work. Love it. Better then all the other hentai games i reckon. although that Angel RPG one is pretty good, but i didn't finish it because it took so long to beat.. so i don't know if you beat it because i haven't fully played it. But Love this submission of work!
As many before me have said, there are glitches. so what. just get off your asses you players and live with it.
*Inv bug- only equipped items you will keep. rest discarded.
*Bug of equpping something to compare and losing other thing in it's place- to stop: simply you cant, but when equipping something that is plate and you have a plate on, simply click the 'O' on it and it will go into your inventory. then click other armour and it will go on.
*partner bug..- simply hit 'space' and go to the right arrow to choose your partner.
*no skills when relog in allocated to slots- simply re-do them everytime you log in.
*slot 3.. well slot 1 = 1 on keyboard to use or click it. slot 2= 3 not 2 =) . slot 3= 4!!!! yes you heard me 4 not 3!. slot 4 = 2 and slot 5 = well 5.
And with me mega does not work either. only dive skill works and goes into slot 5 and only jump works in slot 4 (2 on keyboard). their is a bug where you click across and you see jura and mega etc on slot 4..but it doesn't work. still jump. mega does work, on slot 2.. holy works in slot 3. attack only works in slot 1. all spells except for dive (which doesn't use mana anyway) work in slot 2 but not all work in slot 3. only holy works in slot 3 (4 on keyboard) for me.. blast i had as slot 2 (3 on keyboard) and attack of course slot 1, dive slot 5, and jump slot 4 (really 2 on keyboard).
For Forest!!!!
To get out of forest the directions are!
North (up!)
East (right!)
North again (up!)
East again (right!)
North again.. (up!)
East again.. (right!)
North again.. (up!)
then i think that's it.. if not then go east again then north again. for me it was
North, East, North, East, North, East, North, East, North.
That's it.
For cave.
simply follow until you get to place where you can go either left or right.. simply take the right. and keep going until you have to go north again. you will come to another right and left intersection. choose the right again (east). then follow, go north once you have to, and that's all for the intersections.. (the cave does end.. just takes 30-45mins so make sure you have time on your hands and that your not pissed off at the time because the monsters do start to become highly annoying..
After you come out of cave simply keep going right across the grass. you will find a town. in the big castle is lvl 25 guards that give 2.5k exp and 4060 gold. kill them till about lvl 70. or 80. then you are strong enough to go to tavern (inn), talk to girl, and go on docks to the right of the inn. The bosses are level 60, 62, and 62 again. If you wish kill the king before you leave or train on him. he is in the room with the guards and is level 125. he is quite easy but i suggest having about 25-30,000 hp. and a partner. he gives 50,000 gold, omega helmet and final spear (not as strong as omega spear or cosmic spear. final spear adds 150 power. cosmic spear adds 200 power. omega spear adds 900+ power.)
The king will give 20,000 experience, but has roughly 30-40k hp. he also does 6,000 with his lightning and 2,000 with his blinking attack.
I got all the equipment and was 126 when i had collected it all. this is a great game and is most definetly the most enjoyable and longest games to be able to play here on newsgrounds.
Thanks for the fantastic game Chris, and to all those who made it. it is a thoroughly enjoyable game.
Just if you are wandering i have exactly 605 characters left that i can type, so...
Its a feel good movie. Very good job indeed this submission will be lifting for people who are upset i suppose. It's a very catchy tune. I keep playing it over and over. Fantastic work and well done. Definetly a well deserved front page submission! Keep up the good work! i will be looking forward to any further submissions by you.
Sixr
All 10 flash Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars June 23, 2008
What does his power level say?
It's over 200% .. Lol! That was great. The fur thing is so true btw. Also loved the end part bout Youtube. Anyways great job on this! All my 5 are belong to you. (Haha, Warcraft never gets old.)
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 17, 2008
I must say..
I must say that although no words or real story line it did somehow draw me in for the short time it was.. the bit with the "nudity" or however you would put it left me pondering what was going to happen but the others kind of ruined it because i had already read the reviews.. short, story line could of had a bit more detail, however in a short without word animation it is sometimes hard to go into large detail for a story line. The drawing and animation was mostly brilliant, i loved the detail of when he was walking down at the start and with the trees and sides of the path he was walking on, i could tell you had not went into great detail but thats what made it so great, simple but not overly simple, and not overly emphasising on the drawing technique but the story.. I'll give it a 7. My constructive criticism would be to keep your technique much the same, not necessarily needing colour, but maybe emphasise on the story line so viewers can try to understand the story more.
Hope this helps.
~Sixr
Thank you for the comment.
Since the first scene was added later, naturally writing has improved.
However, I also understand the thing with many improving points
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 4, 2007
Nice work.
Just watched all 3 of the ghetto episodes so far made. And i gotta say they were actually quite funny.
For flash 8 or w/e your using, you draw some pretty damn good drawings considering your only 14 like me. Loved the part "he wasn't that good of a teacher anyway."
Graphics were good as always, sounds were fine, sometimes quite hard to hear what they're saying but the body language makes up for it.
Hence why i give 10 for style.
No interactivity involved so 0 but that doesn't matter, it's a movie, not a game anyways.
Humour is 10 because it was actually quite funny. Like Pandora-Productions said, definetly deserves it's place in the Clock Crew's collection. Added you to my favourite author's btw.
Overall 10. Good Drawings, sounds fine, violence was in there, and nice style. Graphics were also good, no problems/errors with the submission. Overall a nice finish.
Thanks for the favorite! I'm glad you like the series, I'm in a creative slump with it right now, which is why I haven't really released the fourth one :P I probably will soon as I've got some pretty funny ideas for it. Thanks for reviewing!
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 4, 2007
Nice one.
That was so lame and i'm so tired i actually laughed at it. (omg please kill me) Nice one, i reckon you might win the record (if there is one) for making the quickest series ever xD. Nice one.
-Sixr
Oh btw, i'm off to check if any people have abused me in No.5 for that review i said. It'll be funny if someone has...
I really appreciate your reviews, Sixr.
Thanks.
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 3, 2007
im back..
lol now im just doing reviews to make these have higher scores rofl. lol that guy in no 5 who said something funny.. he said he'd nail you to a piece of cow @$%^ (keep it G people!) He does realize that's impossible ? XD! Maybe we should make some system that tests people from "moron", "fool", "tool" or just plain
!@#%$ lol i used $ for S. eh. all im saying is he'd prob break the damn machine. it wouldn't be able to figure out which one he was, so in it's confusion it classified him as all. Which it was not made for. See, drunken people must ramble, i'm perfectly sober and i'm rambling, so imagine what some drunken people can do XD. Well keep the lame jokes coming, and for morons who say they're 18+ and are swearing they're heads off at same time (try half the guys who reviewed No.5) Act you're age, your embarrassing me. And i'm 14. (If i have to spell it out to you this is what i mean.. you're 18+ supposebly, your acting worse then my 9 year old cousin, and he's pretty bad.) And no, by this you cannot classify me as arrogant as if you are ready to be presuming so you guys really are in a class of your own when it comes to being/acting/living as fools. I do agree that some people do make some crap on this, but this aint really crap. Crap is cow dung (someone classified so even before) Unless it's constructive criticism, i don't want or see any need for anything else in a class of criticism. Don't act like children, unless you really want to prove you are still the mental age of one. Btw, if anyone says "yeah but what would you know your 14" right then and there you would prove my point by your own doing. If you believe i'm a child then there should be no need to fight with me, as even i am mature enough to see that fighting or abusement is merely useless. all it does is cause pain, so WHY BOTHER. sure, this guys probably like me and doesn't give a stuff what people say if they've got nothing good to say, so why bother criticizing someone when there not going to give a damn. There is no reason. And that is my reason. Unless the people who are stupid and believe fighting is useful don't read this, well, i guess we can't hope for everyone in this world to grow up and act their age. (Not stereo-typing, more so just those who don't act their age need to grow up.)
-Sixr
Hope this stops at least a bit of useless batter, too no dismay of my own i coherently sadly will not be surprised if i get abused for this in these reviews.
Btw if i screwed anything up, that's because i'm tired and its like some time in the morning. So i'm going to bed now. Goodnight.
Holy shit. I'm 14, dude.
Most of that was pure rambling, but thanks for the review! :)
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 3, 2007
beer,beer,beer,beer,beer...
Man, so far these have all made me laughed. 5 episodes were jokes that were funny because the jokes were so lame, and one of the jokes actually was funny. (lol this one's funny because its so lame: Q: What's red and looks like a bucket A: A Red Bucket! that was actually kind of funny because it was so lame XD!! hmm imma give you 10 because i can. rofl xD. (10 violence is for number 6, which aint that violent but meh i don't care!) Least you care bout your posts, because most people who post stuff on this don't reply to the reviews made on their own submission. it's dumb that they don't, either they just forget, don't have time, or don't really care what people really think of their work. If i put something in i'd want to see what people think of it. Keep up the good work. Keep them lame jokes coming. :D
I will, man! Thanks for the reviews, I appreciate them. :)
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 3, 2007
Wasn't sure what to give for sound or humour..
Man that was a funny flash. Really cool to. Made me laugh a fair lot.
All my 5 are belong to you. 10/10 overall to. Gotta be one of the best movie submissions i've seen so far. I loved the pop-up thing. Although i would've loved for something else to happen, but overall it was a excellent submission. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
-Sixr
Rated 5 / 5 stars December 19, 2006
Excellent work!
Astonishing work. Great pictures, great plot, great narration, great music (KoRn is one of my favourite bands so i knew the song.) Loved the ending part how you can choose who to be with. Keeps going and going, nice length game, long not short.
Reasons for scores:
*Graphics, due to amazing drawings, whether done by you or someone else, there magnificent.
*Style.. The style and layout of the pictures..
*Sound.. KoRn. One of my favourite bands.
*Violence. (choose yes and you'll see what i mean) the killing and also how "ferocious" he is in bed :P
*Interactivity.. makes you think of what to click and how it will affect what will happen to you.. and other obvious reasons, due to the fact it is Hentai..
*Humor.. due to the little cute owls.. (Vrooh-Vrooh!!) :P some other funny content as well..
*Overall, 10. I can see you have put a lot of work into this project, And what an astounding outcome it is! Great work!! Look forward to seeing your other work and i hope it meets the standards of this work. Love it. Better then all the other hentai games i reckon. although that Angel RPG one is pretty good, but i didn't finish it because it took so long to beat.. so i don't know if you beat it because i haven't fully played it. But Love this submission of work!
5 from me!
Cheers,
Sixr.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 28, 2006
Great Game.
As many before me have said, there are glitches. so what. just get off your asses you players and live with it.
*Inv bug- only equipped items you will keep. rest discarded.
*Bug of equpping something to compare and losing other thing in it's place- to stop: simply you cant, but when equipping something that is plate and you have a plate on, simply click the 'O' on it and it will go into your inventory. then click other armour and it will go on.
*partner bug..- simply hit 'space' and go to the right arrow to choose your partner.
*no skills when relog in allocated to slots- simply re-do them everytime you log in.
*slot 3.. well slot 1 = 1 on keyboard to use or click it. slot 2= 3 not 2 =) . slot 3= 4!!!! yes you heard me 4 not 3!. slot 4 = 2 and slot 5 = well 5.
And with me mega does not work either. only dive skill works and goes into slot 5 and only jump works in slot 4 (2 on keyboard). their is a bug where you click across and you see jura and mega etc on slot 4..but it doesn't work. still jump. mega does work, on slot 2.. holy works in slot 3. attack only works in slot 1. all spells except for dive (which doesn't use mana anyway) work in slot 2 but not all work in slot 3. only holy works in slot 3 (4 on keyboard) for me.. blast i had as slot 2 (3 on keyboard) and attack of course slot 1, dive slot 5, and jump slot 4 (really 2 on keyboard).
For Forest!!!!
To get out of forest the directions are!
North (up!)
East (right!)
North again (up!)
East again (right!)
North again.. (up!)
East again.. (right!)
North again.. (up!)
then i think that's it.. if not then go east again then north again. for me it was
North, East, North, East, North, East, North, East, North.
That's it.
For cave.
simply follow until you get to place where you can go either left or right.. simply take the right. and keep going until you have to go north again. you will come to another right and left intersection. choose the right again (east). then follow, go north once you have to, and that's all for the intersections.. (the cave does end.. just takes 30-45mins so make sure you have time on your hands and that your not pissed off at the time because the monsters do start to become highly annoying..
After you come out of cave simply keep going right across the grass. you will find a town. in the big castle is lvl 25 guards that give 2.5k exp and 4060 gold. kill them till about lvl 70. or 80. then you are strong enough to go to tavern (inn), talk to girl, and go on docks to the right of the inn. The bosses are level 60, 62, and 62 again. If you wish kill the king before you leave or train on him. he is in the room with the guards and is level 125. he is quite easy but i suggest having about 25-30,000 hp. and a partner. he gives 50,000 gold, omega helmet and final spear (not as strong as omega spear or cosmic spear. final spear adds 150 power. cosmic spear adds 200 power. omega spear adds 900+ power.)
The king will give 20,000 experience, but has roughly 30-40k hp. he also does 6,000 with his lightning and 2,000 with his blinking attack.
I got all the equipment and was 126 when i had collected it all. this is a great game and is most definetly the most enjoyable and longest games to be able to play here on newsgrounds.
Thanks for the fantastic game Chris, and to all those who made it. it is a thoroughly enjoyable game.
Just if you are wandering i have exactly 605 characters left that i can type, so...
Sixr~
Rated 5 / 5 stars July 13, 2006
Loved it, just kept playing it over and over..
Its a feel good movie. Very good job indeed this submission will be lifting for people who are upset i suppose. It's a very catchy tune. I keep playing it over and over. Fantastic work and well done. Definetly a well deserved front page submission! Keep up the good work! i will be looking forward to any further submissions by you.